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Home : 2008 : Jun : 5
English teacher point of view
By EnglishTchr
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Just looking at the structure of your letter from an English teacher's point of view, I would tell you to try and take out a few of the "I"'s if you can. It will improve the "readability". This is hard when the letter is about yourself, but if you can restructure your sentences so that you don't have quite so many of them, I believe it will help. I think your content is great. Your dedication to your profession comes across strong. Also, take out the "very"'s. The "I"'s and the "very"'s can tend to make your writing seem repetative. I hope this helps, and I wish you the best of luck in your job search. I would want you to be my child's teacher!
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